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Anna C Rumin's avatar

Absolutely beautiful Paula - the stillness at the end.

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Meg Robson Mahoney's avatar

This is particularly lovely: "floating on my back in the pristine sea alongside my siblings and cousins. We are describing for each other the animal shapes we see in the clouds that scud across the pure blue sky. We are deciding which flavour of ice cream we will dive into after dinner tonight."

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Robert Snikkar's avatar

This transports me - I can feel it - see it - hear - it smell it - wonderful evocation

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Jan M. Flynn's avatar

Beautiful piece.

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Peggy Braun's avatar

Yes, indeed--a wonderful description and a wonderful childhood memory. Eco anxiety makes the grieving particularly intense but these memories are precious.

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Paula Halpin's avatar

Thank you, Peggy. It is important, I think, to not let our fear prevent us for taking action against climate change.

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Judith Posner's avatar

A stunning description. And a great break indeed from "eco-anxiety".

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Paula Halpin's avatar

Sadly, today's kids are anxious about the future of the planet. We were fortunate to have grown up in a cleaner environment.

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