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betsy mctiernan's avatar

I didn't think anyone could capture in words how I feel. This is a brilliant piece, even the stage directions. And truth, authenticity and good writing give me a spark, however brief, of hope for us all.

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Jocelyn Lovelle's avatar

Wow. Susie, just wow. Such beautiful cadence. Such power in metaphor. The way you swing from global horrors to personal liberties and communion lost. "While real books are swept off the shelves of libraries to make way for rising seas of artificial intelligence and avalanches of ignorance leaving us in thrall to devices that can remember Andrew Jackson’s second inaugural but not your mother’s smell." Ohmygod. Seriously. There are so many gorgeous pieces of writing in here. This piece is so powerful and real and at the same time lyrical. I'm reminded of some acid jazz I enjoy where the voice over is like a beat poem, running over baseline and the percussion. This is what your piece is like. A jazz band with a narrator, all rhythm and timing and grit.

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